Writing:poetry T1

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WALT:use personification and metaphors to create pictures for our readers.

₽ersonification is when you talk or write about an object as if it was a person.

Metaphor is when you say an object is something it is not and then you tell us why you tell us why you think it is like that.

Something I did well was the detail.

Something I need to work on is punctuation.

Writing term 1:recount

WALT:Use a variety of sentence forms to grab and hold the reader's attention.

WALT:Use punctuation correctly at the beginning and end of sentences.

I think I used great details in my sentences.

I'm still working on my fullstops.