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WALT:use personification and metaphors to create pictures for our readers.₽ersonification is when you talk or write about an object as if it was a person.
Metaphor is when you say an object is something it is not and then you tell us why you tell us why you think it is like that.
Something I did well was the detail.
Something I need to work on is punctuation.
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